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Experimenting with Multiple Openings by Christine Liu-Perkins

5/5/2020

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When I started writing for children, I wrote pretty good first drafts. But when critiques came in, I didn’t know how to address the issues they raised. I could make minor tweaks in wording and add or drop sentences here and there. But I couldn’t figure out how to rework what I had written, how to see it differently, how to imagine something new.
 
One strategy that helps me get beyond seeing only a single way to write a chapter, article, or story is to brainstorm multiple openings. For thirty minutes or so, I push myself to keep writing until I’ve created five or six different beginnings.
 
Writing multiple openings lets me experiment with the tone, focus, structure, etc. It eliminates the pressure of "getting it right" the first time. Also, this process usually clarifies which opening is most promising: the one that makes me want to keep writing—and hopefully, makes the reader want to keep reading. 
 
EXAMPLE
 
The first chapter in one of my works-in-progress describes the early life of the First Emperor of China (the one often known for his army of terracotta warriors). How could I start the chapter in a way that would draw readers in? Here are several openings I drafted: 

  • Before China became an empire under one ruler, it was a collection of individual kingdoms battling each other for power and territory.
 
  • Ying Zheng was born into a world of constant danger and turmoil during a period called the Warring States. Fighting, power plays, and betrayal surrounded him at home and all across the region.
 
  • The First Emperor's victorious rise to power was almost derailed by an assassin's poisoned dagger. Instead, however, the prince who ordered the assassination lost his own head.
 
  • If history had taken a normal course, Ying Zheng would never have become the future First Emperor of China. But a crafty, ambitious merchant schemed to raise Zheng's father from hostage prince to crown prince, thereby putting Zheng in line to the throne.
 
  • From the beginning, Zheng's life was in danger.
 
 
Question: which opening do you think works best?
 


2 Comments
Laura M Perdew
5/6/2020 06:47:16 am

I'd pick the last one!

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Christine Liu-Perkins
5/6/2020 08:01:11 pm

Thanks, Laura! It took me five tries to get to that one. . . .

Christine

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