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Ninja Writing Tip: You Need a Dummy!

10/31/2018

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by Lisa Amstutz
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Does your picture book lack that spark that pulls the reader from page to page? Do people keep saying it feels like an article? If so, I have three words of advice: MAKE A DUMMY.
 
I critique hundreds of picture book manuscripts every year, and often advise making a dummy because IT WORKS!
 
Here’s why:
 
1. It forces you to think visually. There’s an interplay of art and text in picture books that isn’t present in any other book format. As you create your dummy, make sure each spread is a separate scene, and that there is enough variety of scenes in the book to make it visually interesting.
 
2. It tightens your prose. Look at your text again, and take out anything that will be shown in the art. When you finish, read it aloud to yourself or a child. Does it read like a picture book? Make sure the language is sparse but strong.
 
3. It forces you to think through page turns. Add transitions or suspenseful language so the reader MUST find out what happens next. Study current picture books and note how the author entices you to turn the page. This doesn’t happen by accident!
 
4. It helps with your story’s pacing. Look at how many words are on each spread. Have you devoted at lot of text to one scene and very little to the next? Also keep in mind the age and reading level of your audience. How much text can they handle without getting overwhelmed?
 
A picture book dummy is easy to make. Simply fold eight sheets of blank paper in half and staple them in place. Leave the first and last spreads blank to leave room for the title page, author’s note, etc. That should leave you with 13 spreads. Cut out and paste your text onto the dummy or write it out by hand. Sketch out scenes to go along with it. Stick figures are fine.
 
If you don’t want to staple pages, use an online template. At the very least, paginate your manuscript.
 
Sure, it takes time. But it’s worth a try. It may just take your story from drab to dramatic!
 
 
Lisa Amstutz is a freelance editor and the author of 100+ children’s books. For more about her books and editorial services, see www.LisaAmstutz.com.
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5 Comments
Peggy Thomas link
10/31/2018 09:57:48 am

Thanks Lisa. I always forget that I can do this. And it works!

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Margaret Albertson link
10/31/2018 10:55:49 am

I'm typing my NF PB with paginated spreads.

I'll then make the dummy when I've moved all the text around in the MS. This is my first time typing in paginated spreads and it really is nailing those page turns.

Thank you for the encouragement.

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Lisa Amstutz link
10/31/2018 08:01:08 pm

Glad to hear it's helping! Best of luck with your story!

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Charlotte Dixon
10/31/2018 02:35:59 pm

Thank you for these tips and the link!

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Lisa Amstutz link
10/31/2018 08:01:40 pm

You're welcome - thanks for stopping by!

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